Sentence+Level+Revision

Sentence Level
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 * = == Word Choice--Diction == || ===Revise for=== ||
 * ===Use Vibrant Verbs!===
 * Avoid "to be" verbs
 * Avoid passive voice
 * ===Use Clear, Concrete, Concise Descriptions!===
 * Avoid "This is, these are, those are, that is," etc.
 * = == Sentence Variety == ||  ||
 * ===Create Interesting, Varied Sentence Structures!===
 * Open in interesting ways
 * Use interrupters to vary your rhythm